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page button my Kindle to find a page listing Kaitlin s other work A whu button my Kindle to find a page listing Kaitlin s other work A whu s over What the hell Granted yes I knew there was oing to be books in this series as this is listed as book one but I figured there would have been some sort of cohesive ending that would lead into the next book like most books in a series Not just Yup let s I Was A Stranger go ENDThe point of all this I want toive some constructive criticism to Kaitlin as she continues her journey as a writer I think she has amazing potential and I want nothing for her to become a best selling author So I ive her my honest reviews In Hopes That It Helps Her In hopes that it helps her in way Of course a lot *Of This Was My Own Personal Preference *this was my own personal preference there are things I hope she can benefit from I will continue to support her and read all the books she writes And I do believe with each book she will et better and betterHowever I will leave a recommendation I hope this is not an insult to Kaitlin because I m really not meaning it to be but I think fans of the Twilight series will LOVE LOVE LOVE this book and it s following series So I will definitely be recommending it to my friends who I think will enjoy it So if you enjoyed the Twilight series you should definitely check this out I think you d enjoy itGood luck Kaitlin Please don t hate me too much for my words I love you and wish you the best I am excited to see what happens next in this series. Another powerful demon and discovering her own hidden abilities Samantha must discover the truth of her mother's death Her mother's ring proves to be the key to her past and her future leaving her straddling two worlds Eager to protect his newfound love Eli soon finds Samantha might be the one who has to protect him CONTENT WARNING Molestation rape triggers insanity1700 Wor. .
Iption I was wanting details about how characters were feeling
And What Was Happening And Like Her Previous Book Valeriawhat was happening And like her previous book Valeria was a bit of repetition particularly with the phrase snarled He snarledShe snarled was used uite a bit Samantha I really really liked Samantha at first She was sort of this hard ass not The Lives of Stay-at-Home Fathers: Masculinity, Carework and Fatherhood in the United States gonna take crap from no one sort ofirl and those are the types of leading ladies I love But when it comes to characters like that I have really high standards for how I believe they should handle certain situations and when they characters like that I have really high standards for how I believe they should handle certain situations and when they t comply with those standards I et angry Now that is a personal preference and not a bad thing reflective of the writer obviously But I was super disappointed and angry when Samantha ot super emotional and lost her sht Now trust me I do understand In that situation it would be completely normal But I was wanting her to be like F this I m Samantha bitch and handle it like the bad ass she was But she didn t and I was bummedEli So Eli is a Damned who oes to collect Samantha s souland then something like two days later he s in love with her I was left wondering why How did it happen so uickly What was it about Samantha that *was worthy of falling in love with This is where some character development would have helped but for me it *worthy of falling in love with This is where some character development would have helped but for me it left me with my eyebrow raised oing Really You just met her and you suddenly love her RightThe abrupt ending This was me. D Eli is intrigued and makes it his mission to find out why she was not collected by the demon who should own her soul Samantha wants nothing than a normal life and to be left alone She is both leery of and attracted to the strange Eli The young woman finds herself thrust into a world she never knew existed of magic angels and demons and nothing is what it seems Pursued by. Actual rating 25Erk I really wanted to love this book for Kaitlin remember I know her haha I liked the synopsis of the book and it would bring me 1,000 Awesome Writing Prompts great pleasure toive "her a lowing review for her work Butbecause I m honest and especially want to "a lowing review for work Butbecause I m honest and I especially want to honest for her I will be honest about the things I liked and disliked about this bookThe things I liked I like the premise of the storyline I always enjoy when people take traditional things like demons and angels and such religious figures and tweak them a bit after all my own book *I started working on years ago is about angels and the devil Francis *started working on years ago is about angels and the devil Francis Hammy while they re very small supporting characters I really enjoyed themDiego yeah he was pretty bad ass and for some reason I was etting a very Pitch vibe from him you know the awesome bad uy from Rise of the GuardiansThe things I didn t likeAs much as it pains me to say this because I want to praise Kaitlin so much the writing Now this isn t to say her writing is bad In fact it isn t However the writing of this book to me felt very amateur I notice Kaitlin writes a lot like me she is dialogue and action heavy By that I mean she writes a lot about what the characters are doing She snarled She looked up and smiled He looked at his hands etc Those types of things I write with a lot of dialogue and a lot of action description as well The thing I lack and that Kaitlin lacks is regular descr. Cinereal #1 The Damned found something too precious to destroy Harvesting the soul of a first born should be an easy mission for Eli Tawson Scavenger of the Damned But when he meets Samantha Parker he finds there is to his mission than meets the eye Samantha can see through his illusions and after some instruction creates the most powerful binding spell he's ever experience. ,