Of all this rubbishSecond dumb side story is that while this is going on his partner s daughter is inside the shop when a group of armed thugs carry out a pre planned attack to rob the place This *is occuring as the shop manager is trying to get veryone out because of the nuclear blast *occuring as the shop manager is trying to get Dance Real Slow everyone out because of the nuclear blast the silly cow realising that these guys are up to no good and acting suspicious does Juliexit the building to find Paul No she hangs about in the ueue thinking about trying to buy make up and doing nothing until she gets trapped inside and the amazing Paul vades his armed attackers gets past the thugs and rescues her Hurrah Jeez Meanwhile nobody seems to be interested in the nuclear bomb that has went off which was the supposed plot of the story And how does the nuclear attack fit in with the bombing at the start of the book Are they related or not Can we kind of deal with these things I wasn t interested in the idiot gangsters story or the thugsI just wanted a nice apocalypse story and there was no sign of it halfway through and I had lost interest in waiting to see if anything was going to happen with it Very disappointing Pretty goodPretty goodlooking forward to book 2 well written however I could have done without the Edwin side story it didn t really add anything Frankly this deserves 2 stars Not because the writing sucks because the formatting and grammar
Leave A Lot Toa lot to desired I rarely ver pick at grammar but the formatting itself was so horrid it took away from the reading The Day Christ Was Born: The True Account of the First 24 Hours of Jesus's Life experience The premise itself was interesting itself but the transitions were not so smooth and somewhat awkward I was not givennough background in the beginning to care or ven understand about the characters and found my interest waning The story of course is your usual post apocalyptic drama however instead of zombies or an infection it s a nuclear attack which I haven t read that in uite some time I will be reading the second one In the meantime the author really needs to invest in some good diting software and a proof reader Better yet get some beta readers please The bad formatting alone is nough. This Paul has one thing on his mind protect his step daughter Julie and get to his wife Samantha who is out of town on business Through his journey however they will find that sometimes the stakes are just too high Don’t miss the first installment of the xciting new dystopian science fiction thriller destined to bring you into a strange new world of apocalyptic vision. .
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This 121 page novella was *A Good Starting Point To *good starting point to can become a great story Hopefully the Edwinblue car Integrity Restored: Helping Catholic Families Win the Battle Against Pornography episode will bexplained later in series The Decay is a post apocalyptic story caused by nuclear bombs and I m ready to get started on 2nd part of the story I do not see any reason to get all upset over the formatting just turn the page and keep reading There were a few misspelled words as well BUT it was free and a fast read It wasn t a terrible story It was free and a uick read So it had that going for it BUT between spelling The Taste of Night (Signs of the Zodiac, errors don t authors haveditors and proofreaders and the author not knowing the difference between dawn and dusk really Oh and the ntire first chapter never ven hinted atmentioned again so it was pointless Unless it comes back in part 2 although I doubt it Nahit could have been a good solid story but no I wouldn t suggest it I really wanted to give this book a higher rating because the basic plot line is good In fact as others have stated this short read *part 1 of a 2 part story could be worked into a really good full length *1 of a 2 part story could be worked into a really good full length apocalypse novel if the characters were developed further However there were flaws that prevented me from giving than 2 stars First and foremost were the many grammatical and word usage rrors g use of wrong tenses it s vs its grown vs ground rouge vs rogue fowl vs foul They occurred so freuently that they were very distracting Add to that a number of passages that were so over the top in the overuse of imagery that I almost gave up The author really needs to use a good proof reader The Decay reviewThe Decay is the first short post apocalyptic survival book after multiple nuclear detonations in this series written by author Roger Hayden Needs an The Road From Home: The Story Of An Armenian Girl editor and a muse Too many things happening in too small a window When two mob hitmen a gang of 20 thugs a nuclear blast and an attack on the stock market all happen independently on the same day something is very wrong with your narrative Throw in that federal forces remember they re busy with a nuclear bomb close down the small town before a step dad can get from Wal Mart. A nearby nuclear attack rocks a small town in Pennsylvania sending one man and his step daughter on a perilous journey of survival It was a normal Friday afternoon shattered after an unexpected terrorist attack on the New York Stock Exchange While the country focuses on the shocking aftermath of the Wall Street bombing they lose communications cell phones Internet andle. ,
To his house This was a really good novel and I know it was only the first part of a 2 part set this first part was an incredibly uick read Actually this was real Exile and Pilgrim enough feeling that it could have been a much in depth book a muchpic novel with back story and details added in about characters and situations As it was I felt it was rushed but still a good read I ll make sure to add part 2 to my list *A Free Book For *free book for Easy young adult level reading with slightly mature content level This like many other stories online is only part of the story This one nds at a good spot anyway There s a lot going on in this book and little is solved by the time this nds Still not sure where the gangsters come into thisIn any case the characters are ok but not developed well Not that there was much time A bit 2 dimensionalI d like to see where this story goes but not sure how much I d be willing pay for it The description in the book blurb does not relate much to what happens in the first half of this book which is as far as I went with it I was under the impression that this book is about an Hannah Montana: The Movie everyday man trying to look after his family in the aftermath of a nuclear blast Firstly Paul was not driving when he saw the mushroom cloud he was being kidnapped by gangsters not mentioned in the blurb The first half of the book introduces the most uninspiring side stories which were of little interest and added nothing to the story Paul works in anlectrical repair shop and is managing the shop while his boss Bill looks after his cancer striken wife Suddenly Paul is approached by shady gangster guys who want to find Bill and have been unable to reach him by phone or at his house So these guys decide to stalk Paul through town and then try to abduct him in the middle of a shopping centre car park just after the nuclear blast on the horizon Why What use is Paul going to be in finding Bill How is kidnapping him and taking him to whoever wants Bill of any possible use And these idiot men can t recognise a mushroom cloud And they decide to just murder some shopper and let Paul scape What is the POINT. Ctricity as a result of the nation’s downed power grids Paul Hayden is a thirty five year old man who just wants to pick up his step daughter from school and go home while avoiding the busy afternoon traffic While driving he notices a mushroom cloud in the distance The bright radiance of the sky sends the townspeople into a panic and mass soon vacuation follows Through. .