Mally not one to critiue heavily for SPaG errors you can see plenty of reviews I ve done where others have picked those type of errors apart I m not the grammar policebut here I couldn t even make it halfway It badly needs editing from someone who can point out that real people do not talk like this is written For me that makes it a no go Did not like the semi cliffhanger ending I also felt that too much of the book was the characters going back and forth about what they should do when there was a pretty obvious solution This was really good I hope a seuel is written soon Only partially read I may come back to it but at the moment it is driving me nuts This is not a full length novel it s simply long It has a cliffhanger ending and angst than a teenager Now I m just pissed off and not sure if I m going to waste time reading the next please tell me there is a book 2 coming I hope there is a seuel to this It definitely calls for one I felt really really bad for Gail for like 90% of the story I hate how he was treated by
His Family And By family and by in thisbut I guess that goes to show how *much I liked him and wanted him to have a happy ending Also there were times where I felt like we *I liked him and wanted him to have a happy ending Also there were times
WHERE I FELT LIKE WE JUSTI felt like we just about things that happened as like a summary and I would have rather gotten to experience that Still it s not a horrible cliffhanger type of ending but I definitely want a seuel with these characters not a second book in the series with different peopl. For one night But their families have other plans In a desperate attempt to eep control over their lives they will need to make the hardest decision yetAre they ready to be parentsThis is a full length romance novel it contains steamy scenes and male pregnancy mpreg Adults onl. ,
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PICKS THE BABY PACT BY WOLFThe Baby Pact by Wolf and Rosa Swann was a fast paced story of three men discovering just how far they d go to protect the people they love The first in their Baby Pact series things start off with an intriguing combination of soap opera ese drama and smoking hot sexI haven t read a lot of ABO stories fanfic doesn t count right so I was interested in checking one out The idea of a deeply segregated society rings a note of relevance to this day and ageThe Baby Pact in a way is an examination of patriarchal society Alphas are at the top of the ladder and receive the most privilege Omegas are at the bottom and experience serious oppression every aspect of their lives are controlled by the Alphas in their lives parents or spousesConsidering these shifters live side by side with humans I was disappointed by the lack of acknowledgement in the similarities between the marginalization of Omegas and women Even an offhand remark would have been niceIt was also a bit weird how basically all of the secondary characters were awful people family members and even coworkers It made it so that the MCs were isolated and
THEY DEVELOPED AN US VS THEMdeveloped an Us vs Them though I m not sure if that was intentional or not In some instances the Evil Alphas seemed like caricatures of villains than real charactersThere is so much going on in this book It makes it engaging in a way where you can t help but wonder what will happen to th. Gail an Omega has been hiding from other shifters for over half a decade determined to choose his own path in life even if that means working two jobs During the day he works at a bookstore and in the evenings he is an exotic dancer Lucien and Cyrus an Alpha and a Beta love eac. ,
E MCs nextSpeaking of I "liked all three MCs though at times I wanted to slap them upside the head " all three MCs though at times I wanted to slap them upside the head when Gail described as overly cautious and in hiding agrees to go home with Lucien and Cyrus when he doesn t now them Seemed uncharacteristically riskySome people would probably consider the ending a cliffhanger though I wouldn t technically call it that The major conflict is pretty much wrapped up but there are uite a few unanswered uestions and loose ends left dangling So be aware of that if you like your books neatly finishedI had a hard time writing this review for The Baby Pact because even after ruminating for a few days I couldn t decide on how to rate it It s one of those books where you can t help but get engrossed even when you re scoffing at a character s poor decisions I have to admit that I ll probably be reading the next book so I can see what happens nextCopy provided in exchange for a fair and honest review Wanted Can t wait for the second book Hoping for a seuel I enjoyed this I ve gotta call this one a DNF Did not finish I like the content itself but the writing I could not handle It s very stilted and awkward The conversations
appear formal without any use of words like he s instead it is he is nearly everyformal without any use of words like he s instead it is he is nearly every and it ept pulling me out of the story so terribly that I finally gave up It s not grammatically incorrect though there are plenty of those errors but it doesn t read fluid it reads choppy and jarring I am nor. H other a relationship condemned by shifter society and have never felt the need to find an Omega They sometimes pick up humans to spice things up but never Until one night they end up in a bar where they see a dancer they can’t Alien keep their eyes off They want him even if only.