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Th. Jack’s TroublesJack’s troubles as he finds himself and embroiled in the political landscape of the Trilska empire as war threatens to break out collapsing the last three hundre.
Markious Wester ¼ 2 SummaryIted for vol 3 So this is lot of the same from the first book Sex *sex a lot of blood being sprayed of the same from the first book Sex * a lot of blood being sprayed of the same from the first book Sex a lot of blood being sprayed the body of dying enemies orgies 3somes some brutality Mortal Kombat style and then poof end of the book Needless to say I m looking forward to the 3rd oneI m rather liking this Harem The MC isn t a punk and what s funny is that he s not even in charge He s 1st wife isno seriously she s done like a serious 180 from the first book On to the next Piral out of control as these women complicate things Can Jack keep up with them all and there wants and protect them even as the threat of the shadow council loom overhead. E flashback None of this detracts from the story it just
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